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Andlat

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Re: Halloween Revenge
« Reply #7 on: November 02, 2020, 08:53:08 AM »
Freddy's certainly learning a lesson and the week's barely begun! I'm excited to see how he's made full of grace, as well as what the rest of the week brings.


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Re: Halloween Revenge
« Reply #8 on: November 02, 2020, 11:58:39 AM »
Excellent story as usual, DaraJaney.  Do have a question though, which really applies to the genre as a whole.  Why is Freddy so obsessed with showing off his panties or maintaining any decorum in general?  The spell apparently dictates that he follow his mother's orders but she has not ordered him to be decorus and it's doubtful he would know what that meant. Couldn't he effectively resist his mother by acting like a boy?  Sure it would be embarrassing at first but he does realize his actions and attire are all due to his mother.  He should go for it and behave as poorly as possible for a little girl.  Sure she could issue more orders but are they really intending to keep him under a spell for the rest of his life?  Also, is the spell effective outside of his mother's proximity?  Could he just leave her side after a ride or sneak off in a crowd of strangers and avoid her?  Maybe go home on his own and change into his boy clothes and go to a friend's house until the spell wears off in a week.

Definitely not trying to be argumentative and, as the author, you are in control of your work.  It would just be interesting to see the limits of the spell and our protagonist testing those limits with some success.  After all, spells (suspending disbelief) like everything else are not perfect.


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Re: Halloween Revenge
« Reply #9 on: November 03, 2020, 02:21:38 AM »
Freddy woke early on Tuesday wondering what his mother had in store for him today.  ‘Full of grace.’  What did that mean?  Grace was a girl’s name as far as he was concerned.

His mother made him wear the same short pink dress with petticoats that the witches had put him in on Halloween night.  She ordered him to put on white tights and pull the matching frilly knickers on over them.  His sisters stood relishing the sight of their brother struggling into tights and obediently pulling on frilly knickers.

“So … off to Madame Patrice’s” his mother declared as Freddy tried to push his short flared dress down as much as possible and Chloe helpfully tied several pink ribbons in his ringlets.  Who was Madame Patrice?  He suspected that the girls knew from their amused looks.

Once again he sat in the back of the car with his petticoats extending over his sisters’ trouser legs.  They pulled up outside a building marked “Madame Patrice’s School of Deportment”.  Freddy looked puzzled.  His sisters tittered.

It was still early and Mdme Patrice was the only one there.  “Ah!  Chloe, Maggie!  We haven’t seen you here in a long time.”  The two sisters looked a little uneasy.  “It’s their brother who needs some lessons this time”, his mother pointed out.  Mdme Patrice looked down her nose at the mass of pink frills in front of her.  “Brother?!”  “Yes, he used to think that girls were stupid so we are letting him see from the inside as it were.”

Mdme Patrice seemed quite happy with this.  “Excellent!  But I am fully booked today.  Because it is school mid-term I have many groups all day.”  Freddy allowed himself a little grin as his mother looked disappointed.

“Well perhaps he could join some of your groups?” she suggested, wiping the grin off his face.  “Yes that is possible”, Mdme Patrice agreed.  “So, can we leave him with you then?  Pick him up at 6pm?”  Freddy’s face dropped.  “Bien sur!  He can join all of the classes today so!”

“Now girls”, his mother turned away since everything was settled, “would you like to go to the adventure park?”  “Oh yes”, they chorused.

Freddy sighed heavily.  The adventure park was the best thing for miles around. He loved climbing the ropes and swings.  But he had to accept that he would not enjoy it much in his short frilly dress.

The others left him clutching his petticoats nervously.  Just then a gaggle of girls came in.  Not one of them was over 8 he noted disconsolately.  Yet he was the one dressed in the most juvenile fashion in his pink dress, flared from breast level, and his ringlets tied up with pink bows.

He spent an hour and half flouncing around with the real girls, practicing feminine deportment, curtseys, sitting while controlling his petticoats, sitting with his knees pressed demurely together. Every time he curtsied the girls around him giggled.  He supposed that he must have been unavoidably flashing his frilly knickers when he held his petticoats out.

As he waited for the next lesson he wondered how it could get any worse.  He had his answer almost immediately as a couple of boys arrived in the next group.  It was quite clear that they regarded the whole thing as a laugh but having this older ‘girl’ in so short a dress that she regularly flashed her frilly knickers was a real bonus for them.

The first group after lunch included some girls his own age.  Initially a little relieved, he soon realised that they just thought it was hilarious to see a teenage girl in ringlets and a frilly pink dress – and when they inevitably glimpsed his knickers they were beside themselves with laughter.

When his mother picked him up at six he had been flouncing around and curtseying almost continuously for eight hours.  Mdme Patrice made him demonstrate for his mother and sisters.  They were delighted to see him mincing around with his hands held out daintily, holding out his petticoats as he curtsied and carefully gathering his underskirts as he sat.

Even better, they watched as he continued to mince down the street outside and exploded in laughter.  Freddy tried to look less like a sissy but found it hard to remember how to walk like a boy and his three-inch heels didn’t help.

“Wednesday’s girl is merry and glad”, his mother recited.  The sisters look at their glum brother sitting amongst his petticoats.  “That will be an achievement!”

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Re: Halloween Revenge
« Reply #10 on: November 03, 2020, 03:16:41 AM »
DaraJaney, This is another great chapter.  Freddy is being put through the process of what a girl does on a daily basis.  His mom is letting him know what each day will be. 

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Re: Halloween Revenge
« Reply #11 on: November 03, 2020, 11:22:46 AM »
It certainly seems like Freddy will be quite adept at femininity by the end of his week. What does it mean, I wonder?

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Re: Halloween Revenge
« Reply #12 on: November 03, 2020, 01:14:39 PM »
After "grace" training, time for Freddy to re-practice his swagger.  Spells/schmells, maybe he should channel his best Freddy Krueger and do a little slashing.

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Re: Halloween Revenge
« Reply #13 on: November 03, 2020, 03:25:11 PM »
Ballet class next? Cheerleading?

 

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