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Re: Dani's Little Sister
« Reply #21 on: August 23, 2020, 09:09:52 PM »
Andlat, Please check your notes and find the next chapter.  We all are waiting to see what is going to happen to Dani's little sister.   ;D


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Re: Dani's Little Sister
« Reply #22 on: August 26, 2020, 07:38:42 PM »
Andlat, were you able to check your notes.  We are all hanging in suspense for a continuation of this fantastic story.  PLEASE, don't keep us waiting. :'(


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Re: Dani's Little Sister
« Reply #23 on: August 27, 2020, 09:51:16 PM »
Andlat, were you able to check your notes.  We are all hanging in suspense for a continuation of this fantastic story.  PLEASE, don't keep us waiting. :'(

Unfortunately it'll be a bit. My notes weren't as extensive as I hoped.

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Re: Dani's Little Sister
« Reply #24 on: August 28, 2020, 10:35:12 AM »
Found this, Andlat.  It may help.  Certainly it's great advice for anyone who writes fiction.

"Hemingway never wrote a treatise on the art of writing fiction.  He did, however, leave behind a great many passages in letters, articles and books with opinions and advice on writing. Some of the best of those were assembled in 1984 by Larry W. Phillips into a book, Ernest Hemingway on Writing."  The article's author selected seven of their  favorite quotations from the book and they are as follows:
1: To get started, write one true sentence.
2: Always stop for the day while you still know what will happen next.
3: Never think about the story when you're not working.
4: When it's time to work again, always start by reading what you've written so far.
5: Don't describe an emotion--make it.
6: Use a pencil. [need to consider the time frame]
 

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Re: Dani's Little Sister
« Reply #25 on: August 28, 2020, 10:46:57 AM »
Apologies, must have exceeded limits.

*7: Be Brief.

Should have followed Hemingway's advice.  :-[

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Re: Dani's Little Sister
« Reply #26 on: August 28, 2020, 04:29:17 PM »
Interesting advice! I'm especially intrigued by the advice about re-reading what you've already written because other sources have advised against that, lest you get trapped in the endless cycle of revision.

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Re: Dani's Little Sister
« Reply #27 on: August 29, 2020, 10:54:06 AM »

 

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