A Model Son

[babycakes]

While permanent babyhood may be Jake's unfortunate future, he certainly won't be alone.  Janice's mother invested too much for her fate to be other than permanent infancy.  With his internet popularity, Jake should have other friends soon.  Maybe even a play group with other souls suffering a similar fate in the surrounding area whose "caretakers" have been inspired by Jake's notoriety. And no, this is not a request for a second rebirth of this excellent tale.  Many thanks for your Herculean writing efforts DaraJaney!

[Sissy Little Girl]

DaraJaney, that was a great story and I am sorry to see it end.  Hopefully, you will start another story real soon.

[JulietJane]

darajaney....

your stories just rock. i have spent more than one afternoon binging several of them until i read them all. and having read them all, i have noticed a minor problem with a couple, this one included.

on more than one occasion, and using this one as an example, there are times when you drop a plot element into a story with no lead up, and no real aftermath. the couple of occasions you've done it, left sort of an 'empty spot' in the story. for example, in this one, you had the social worker come and check on Jake for what is ultimately a pretty big turning point. however, she came, did her thing, and left, and what could've been a very exciting scene, was merely left as sort of, "there. that's over. deal with it." true, overall a very small part of a big story, but your overall quality is better than that. but again, recall.... i REALLY love your stories.

now since you seem open to suggestions, there are elements in this story, and perhaps future stories, that could be addressed. for example, hands. Jake's hands have been under restraint for a VERY long time. at no point in the story do you hint that he's had proper use of them since his initial dressing in them. well, it might be 'fun' at some point for it to be discovered that his hand muscles have atrophied to the point of near uselessness. imagine his reaction.

also, there might be something done about his teeth. on basically a soft food diet, there might be some vitamin deficiency where his teeth get looser and looser. a dentist could declare they can't be saved. reactions would be nice to see all around. and don't forget Jake's 'girlfriend' either.

last thing, and this isn't just a thing with your stories but stories of this type in general. the pacifier's and speech. no kid Jake's age is just going to grunt through a paci when severe life changes are happening to him. there are going to be some real vocal protests against them, unless there are very direct punishments to 'train' them not to speak, or maybe ONE BIG punishment, of surgically altering his tongue and/or vocal cords.

all that being said, i hope you took the criticism as it was intended, in a friendly way, and by all means, PLEASE KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.
THANK YOU FOR YOUR IMMENSE EFFORTS IN THIS! YOU ARE APPRECIATED!

Fondly,
Juliet

[DaraJaney]

Hi Juliet,

Many thanks for your kind and encouraging comments.  I'm sure there are many plot holes, especially when I return to a story after a break.  Some stories are well planned out and others I just make up as I go along.

I probably balk at some of the more extreme physical alterations that you suggest.  And for me the idea of being a fully formed teenage boy trapped having to act as a baby girl can be more appealing than being made more like a baby.  But I have ventured into that area with forced baby talk so you never know.

DaraJ

[babyamylee]

Such a great story. I can see Dara hasn't posted in a while, and it's not usually this long, so I hope everything is okay. She has given so many so much pleasure on this site, I really hope whatever she's doing she's happy and healthy.

[sarahpenguin]

Hmm given that Jake's nursery and even prams even are set up to be live streamed 24/7 at Janice’s nursery too so now so the pair won't go offline togather? :)

[BabyDenise]

I just finished reading this story and it was another great story that you have written.

The only question I have is the motive of Jake's mother. Unless she had the internet video planned from the start, there appeared to be little reason to have Jake continue in his diapers and dresses.

Regardless, it was a very good story and I look forward to more stories from you.