Slow Burn (Repost)

[Paddybaby]

Thanks for a great story. Would love an epilogue telling what happened a year later??

[babyamylee]

I was thinking of writing a sequel for a epilogue and I started it but I did get some comments which really put me off earlier. I might do it another time.

[Andlat]

I was thinking of writing a sequel for a epilogue and I started it but I did get some comments which really put me off earlier. I might do it another time.

It seems as though this story was a resounding success for a lot of people, but you definitely deserve a break. I think a lot of people would welcome an epilogue with open arms, but as the author, it's entirely up to you. There is that adage about leaving them wanting more, after all!

[jenniesissy]

So very, very sorry to see this delightful tale come to and end.  But, all good things must come to an end - and this story was a very good thing - in my view, a ‘classic’ of this genre.  My thanks to the author for the creativity, time and energy devoted to creating it - and for being so kind to share it.

[bobbie99]

I have been reading your story from the beginning and have loved the story.  You built up the birthday party for what it seemed like a long time.  Your story telling with emotions and description were what made the story come alive and have the reader really feeling sorry for Chris.   I’m disappointed in that the last chapter though.  It felt rushed compared to the other chapters.  Not as much detail as in previous chapters.  For example, what did his Aunt give him as a birthday present.  That would have been a clue if she knew of Chris’s punishment.  What kind of toys did he get?  Any clue that he would be getting a nursery?
I feel that his mother was never going to allow him to be a boy.  That the option to be a boy again was just another mind game to trick Chris into another year.  You could have had a flash back of his mother and sister planning the baby girl’s room and the birthday party and the planning of the deception. 
He got a baby girls room but will he also be surprised with baby bottles, high chair, child harness, car seat.  Of course, the main surprise has to be a special spanking giver for when he is a bad baby.
Please add a few chapters as a flashback from Chris’s memory of the day and of his mom and sister’s conversations.

[babyamylee]

My Mommy says I have to continue writing stories so I will revisit this one later. It will be after a few others I'm working on but will be a sequel story that will overlap I think so don't worry Bobbie, you'll get another chapter technically going into more detail of his life plus some more.

[Baby Mac]

I hope it has hypnosis in it.