Betty Pearl's Sissy Stories 20.1
Sissy Story Archives (older stories) => Recent Inactive Sissy Stories => Topic started by: Jamespir on October 22, 2018, 11:50:11 AM
-
My name is Andy today is my dads funeral and also my 18th birthday both I have been dreading he married my step mum or mummy as I will refer to her for the rest of this story about two years ago and she has made my life hell and today Will be no different the suit I am wearing will probably be the last shred of male clothing ill be wearing for a long time as mummy has informed me after the funeral I will be starting my life as a cute three year old baby girl and her and my sisters molly aged 4 and Connie aged 9 would become my older sisters .Mummy has been angry with me for a long time since she caught me masturbating in a pair of my sister Connie's panties almost a year to the day and ever since then has made me wear little girls panties under my clothes for work and daily activities as well as to bed . When my dad found out id been wearing panties he had a heart attack and suffered heart failure and we knew he would die from it he died last week and Mummy promised me I would pay for his death
This morning she gave me a birthday card with the number 3 on and inside it explained the rules for my new life so starting today I would be dressed and expected to act just like a three year old I would be wearing nappies at all times and treated exactlly the same as my sister molly and this would continue until she saw fit .I was handed a small present and it was a pink pacifier mummy has clipped it under the jumper I am wearing today and has threatened to make me use it if I cause any issues today she informed me I would get the rest of my presents at my tea party later .The wake was coming to an end and mummy said we were going home to get ready for the tea party
We got home and mummy said it was time for me to open another present ..it was a pretty pink dress like my sister molly would often be seen wearing and some pink panties though these were like training panties as they had a terry lining mummy then said she would take me upstairs and get me dressed for the party ….. I'm not wearing that I shouted she grabbed me by the arm and smacked my bottom several times now young lady she said you are going to become a 3 year old u want to get off to little girls panties you will become one also its your fault we no longer have your dad so now its time for you to pay the price you are no longer the man of the household but the baby and if you want your inheritance when you reach 21 you will do as your told .she placed the pacifier in my mouth and led me upstairs where she proceeded to cut off the clothes I was wearing then she produced to very thick adult diapers and said all babies cant control themselves and put me in the nappies she then pulled up the panties I was giving earlier and placed the dress over my head .. I caught my eye in the mirror and I looked like a very large toddler
how sweet my mummy said the dress barely covered the rather frilly pink panties and diapers
mummy next produced some white tights and slipped them up my legs I cried as I once again caught a look in the mirror
She then informed it was time for my next present and I was to follow her to my room
gone were the posters of cars and bands I had it was now pink and had babyish style posters and wall paper where my king size bed once stood was a toddler bed similar to the one my sister Molly used I wanted to shout out but reluctantly said thank you mummy she then said we would go downstairs and I could watch some television till party time . she led me to a playpen that had been set up and put on some babyish cartoons and said they would be back after they go themselves ready
I wondered what was to come
let me know what you think
-
Thanks for writing. You've provided an interesting plot concept. Also, you did ask for feedback so in the spirit of enhancing your work efforts, I would suggest working on sentence structure and especially punctuation.
-
chapter two the party
as I was sat watching the babyish cartoons the doorbell rang I wasnt expecting to have anyone see me dressed as I was I was frightened and wet the nappies I was wearing .Mummy answered the door and I could hear Auntie Sharons voice my mummys sister I heard her say where is she I'm dying to see her she came in with several bags put them on the floor and walked to the playpen
oh she's so cute you have done a really good job . who knew my nephew was big sissy as she grabbed my nappies she realized it was wet oh baby needs a change its a good job I bought supplies .. she emptied the bags and inside were nappies wet wipes a changing mat and a selction of my cousins old bibs she placed the mat on the floor and I realized they were gonna change me in front of everyone I tried to stop them and was told now now andrea baby girls dont have any shame plus youve nothing doown their worth hiding anyway . as she took down my nappies my cousins and sisters laughed at my very small coc-k and balls auntie was right I was not very endowed .they dressed me back up and then said tea time … We have a present for you
as we entered the kitchen I noticed my cousins old high chair I was quickly strapped in on the table was sandwiches ,quiche and crisps I went to get some that was close to me and auntie smacked my hand no baby we have food for you they put a bowl in front of me it was a load of mushed up veg I was given a plastic spoon .. auntie said will u feed yourself or will I have to do it
before I could do it she took a large spoonful and put it in my mouth I gagged it was that horrible
get used to it she said thats all you'll eat from now on
When tea had finished it was present time I was placed on my aunties knee and she bounced me up and down I felt the rush to pee and soaked my nappies again auntie must have noticed cause she said eww whos a smelly bum we will change you later . Mummy started opening presents they contained a variety of baby girl dresses and panties in my size plus babyish pyjamas as well as bottles and pacifiers ..the next present she got me to open it was a doll that cried and wet mummy said I must have it with me at all times and I will dress and care for it each morning
the next parcel was larger . it contained a large potty and potty training supplies .Auntie Sharon Spoke and said this is so u can join molly and your cousin nicky when they start potty training this week but unlike them you will never graduate to panties .I started to cry and mummy suggested it was nap time but before I went there was one more present I opened it and it looked like a bat you might play ping pong with .Mummy said its time to meet Mr. Paddle it and your botty are going to get quite aquainted . Aunt Sharon bent me over and mummy took down my nappies and they proceeded to give me 10 really hard swats on the bottom Auntie said this is what disgusting boys who want to wear nappies and play baby deserve .i tried to explain it wasn't me but my tears and pacifier got in the way .. when they finished auntie took me upstairs and turned off the light .. I knew this was not going to be fun
-
Yes, sentence structure and punctuation would go a long way.
From a creative perspective, try not to rush through the story saying "This happened and then this happened and then this..."
How did he feel when he got the card? As someone who isn't yet an adult, how does he feel about being punished for his father's death? Does anyone in the family think his mother is being silly? Was it hard for him to 'behave' at the funeral? What is stopping him seeking help from a sane adult?
As mundane as they may seem to write, I find it's the details, description and introspection that the readers here most appreciate.
Good luck! I look forward to see where you take this story.
-
It is a good story and yes what the others have said sentence structure would be good. If you want you should ask someone on here you know to proof read for you. I have seen that on a lot of sites and the author gives credit where credit is due to those who have helped.
Definitely looking forward to more of this story keep it coming.
-
Yes, sentence structure and punctuation would go a long way.
From a creative perspective, try not to rush through the story saying "This happened and then this happened and then this..."
How did he feel when he got the card? As someone who isn't yet an adult, how does he feel about being punished for his father's death? Does anyone in the family think his mother is being silly? Was it hard for him to 'behave' at the funeral? What is stopping him seeking help from a sane adult?
As mundane as they may seem to write, I find it's the details, description and introspection that the readers here most appreciate.
Good luck! I look forward to see where you take this story.
While sentence structure is important for me it is more about the introspection etc .
Still a very good story
-
I will do more before weekend just busy with work at mo
-
The story is great and I am enjoying it. The comments about punctuation and sentence structure are true but do not be discouraged because it is a really good plot!
-
The following day I was awoken to mummy opening my curtainsbottt and the sun shining in . She handed me a bottle of juice and as I drank it she checked my nappies I was very wet .Sh seeemed really pleased .Goody she said our plan is working dont you just love your nappies baby girl .I tired to protests but the pacifier in my mouth prevented any audible speech . She got me out of bed and proceed t dress me in one of the pretty dresses and panties over my nappies and then said we were going out to get me ready for potty training later that week I wondered what she meant by that .she strapped me into a car seat in the back of the car which forced my dress to ride up and put my nappies and panties clearly on show to anyone who was to look in the window . I really wanted to protest but I felt so weak and submissive and realized they must have laced my bottles with something
During the car ride I thought back to the day she caught me with my sisters panties .. what on earth do you think your doing she shouted . I could not deny anything she had seen me .. I was just seeing what they feel like I said ..i was about to take them off and she said no keep them . connie wont want them now … what do you think your father would say knowing his 17 year old son likes to wear panties like a pwetty liddle girl … dont tell him please Il do anything I promise .. True right she shouted we will throw away all your boys underwear and you can wear little girls panties at all times ..I kept thinking why didnt I stop her why didnt I say no … I felt the car stop and we had arrived at our destination it was a beauty salon run by mummy's friend . Mummy undid the buckle and let me out the car .She told me to do as I was told and I wouldn't get spanked
she took me in and mummy's friend Janet said aww isnt she cute is she ready … mummy nodded they strapped me in a chair .. they began by shaving my head .i used to love having thick hair and couldn't help shed a tear … mummy produced a blonde wig that had been shapped into piigtails like that of a 3 -4 year old I felt Janet put some thing on my head and they put the wig on top .. I soon realized it was glue and that I would forever look like a little girl wth pigtails .Next mummy pulled down my tights and undid my nappies . They tittered at how small my pen-is was .. they began shaving my area and legs till I was a smooth as a baby .. I felt them fiddling with my tiny pen-is and I felt it making me hard … Enjoy it mummy said you will never get this feeling again .. I felt a sharp pain like I had been given an injection . and it felt like they had attached something to my pen-is when they were finished they showed me there handy work and they had given me a girls vagina . This is just an attachment but you are stuck in this now You never have to worry about your nasty little peepe anymore it is firmly stuck into this fake attachment so you will look like the little girl you are ..We wouldn't want your cousins questioning why your different would we ….they reattached my nappies and pulled up my tights .. I was very sore down below and as she strapped me in the car to go home I felt myself falling asleep . and began thinking about my 18th birthday and when she gave me the card ..
-
Jamespir,
I like the direction your plot is progressing.
A writer develops their own little unique characteristics and I think I'm seeing that start to develop in your writing.
I'm looking forward both reading your next part of your story and seeing how both your plot and writing style develop.
-
oh i like the story please keep it going awhile longer being a wittle sissy is wonderful
-
Hi Jamespir,
I am enjoying this and understand your wish to get on with the story but as a previous author to betty's site who initially had some constructive criticism I have to agree the comments regarding punctuation and spelling. It shouldn't stifle your creativity but will make your readers happier.
regards, Sissy Susie.
-
Happy new year i have been able to do some more and here it is
It felt like I was back on the day of my birthday I awoke and went downstairs to breakfast all my sisters were there as well as my step mother . I was wearing the little pink nighty and the white cotton cinderella panties I wore to bed every night since I got caught .Every morning my sisters would laugh and snigger at the site of their 17 year old brother weaing clothes suitable for a very young girl .. my stepmother always made me stand by my chair so she could check my panties for any stains or if I had wet in the night .. I wasn't a bed wetter but once I was in bed , I wasn't to get out till morning when mummy would call me down … I often thought to myself why would I submit to this embarrassing treatment . but I knew if I didn't I would be thrown out and lose my inheritance . mummy came and cheeked me and pulled the seat out and instructed me to sit down on the chair ..i was always given bacon and eggs on my birthday and today was no different . usually I had loads of presents to open today there was a one card id hoped it was money I had been dropping lots of hints … mum tied a tea towel round my neck just like she did every breakfast so I wouldn't get my nighty messy , I ate my breakfast and she said I could open my card I opened it up and it had a big 3 on the front and a little elephant with a balloon … I looked confused and said im 18 today .. Mummy interrupted and said there a letter inside it will explain all .
It read : dear andrew ,
as you know your father passed away last week when he found about your disgusting habit and the fact you want to wear knickers and nighties just like a little girl would
I had hoped that since your last birthday we would have helped you grown out of this phrase
but you seem to want it more and more . So Myself and your sisters have decided that as of today you will be reduced to a three year old .. this means you will wear nappies round the clock .. you will continue to wear you childish panties and clothes to bed but you will also be wearing nappies . from now on you will be treated the same way as your younger sister molly , although she will now be your older sister . She is ready to sleep in a proper bed now so your room will now be swapped with molly's that way you will have everything a baby girl needs .. as you know you cannot claim you inheritance till you are 21 so for the next three years you will submit to our will or you can pack your bags and leave and you will forfiet any rights you have
love mummy
I was In tears I knew I really had no choice so when mummy asked did I agree with the demands of the letter I said yes ,,
just then I felt the car had stopped and mummy was getting me out of the car as we went in the house my cousins were there with my auntie and everybody laughed at my appearance mummy put her hands on my shoulders and sat me on the floor next to my little cousins and my sister molly who were playing dollies and said I was to stay and play while the grown ups talked … I was too scared to move
-
Definitely keep going, Jamespir. I'm really liking this and want to see what happens next.
-
yes definately keep it coming. There is a lot of room to continue this story, i love it.
-
it felt like we wer sat on there ages when my cousin announced she was done they checke her potty pulled up her panties and she was allowed to play my other cousin was also allowed to go and play mummy checked my potty and it was empty she suggested I stay on it till I was done .. I really didn’t need to go as I had already soaked my nappies I was on there a least an hour every so often someone would check I was done eventually I felt a little stream go in the potty everyone cheered mummy made me stand up and wiped ,my private area then made me lie down whilst she changed my nappies . it was then suggested we take the girls to the park mummy said we were going to .she got a pink coat that belonged to my sister and put it on me . I saw in the mirror that it did not cover my nappies so everyone would see me .. mummy suggested we walk and aunty put one of the cousins in reins to stop her running off .i have a spare set she said to mummy perfect mummys said these were pink with a little bear motive on the front we walked down the street and people were laughing and staring at the big baby I couldn’t help but cry we arrived at the park and the girls were allowed to go off and play mummy took me over to the baby area and played with me in there all the mothers were commenting on how pretty my dress was and why I was dressed this way mummy told them this is what I wanted and they laughed and said it was probably best .Al l of a sudden I felt the urge to poop I asked mummy if she could let me use the toilet and she said they hadn’t bought the potties with them but sometimes they had one in the baby changing area we walked over and there was a long queue I started to squirm and before I knew let out a large fart and filled my nappies with poop people could smell these .and commented on ho gross it was .. mummy was very embarrsed and said she would have to change me however it was unfair to force all those queuing for the changing room to have to put up with the smell so she decided to change me on the floor right by the side of the queue every one was staring at us a nd giggled when my nappies were lowerd and saw my fake little girl parts
sit seemed like she took ages to change me eventually she was done and mummy went over tomy aunties and told me to sit on the floor and play time was over for me and I would be in bed when we got home .Aunty asked mummy if we would like to come over Saturday and said its baby dance class maybe we could register Baby andrew … I wanted to protest but kept quiet as I had already been threatened with a spanking
-
keep it coming love the story