Due to Betty's recent illness, most of Betty's sites are limited to members only, and no new registrations for memberships will be accepted at this time.

Trans News ~ Headline News ~ Science News ~ Tech News ~ Paranormal & Aliens
Odd News ~ Betty's YouTube ~ My other channel


The more you give, the
more we can give back!
There has been,

Hits to Betty's
Pubs since
Sept. 30th, 2004

Author Topic: My first attempt at a story  (Read 27232 times)

0 Members and 6 Guests are viewing this topic.

Corinne

  • Baby Buns
  • **
  • Posts: 6
  • Karma: +28/-0
Re: My first attempt at a story
« Reply #28 on: October 26, 2019, 10:01:47 AM »
Melanie seems evil wonder what she is thinking up at this moment...giggles

I think she is a sneaky girl, and I wonder what she is up to, I could even start to feel a little pity for poor Ian/Angie.


robertson

  • Ballerina
  • ****
  • Posts: 17
  • Karma: +2458/-2
Re: My first attempt at a story
« Reply #29 on: October 27, 2019, 10:33:40 AM »
Just a short addition

Part 10 – Back to Melanie
It had been such a good weekend, Melanie thought.  She was back home with her mum and two brothers, and she lay on the bed, relishing the trouble she had got little Ian/Angie into.  His mum had decided to indefinitely extend the baby girl punishment, even into the school year.  It was arranged that he would dress as a boy for school, but that the nappy would be on and Melanie or his sister would change him.  She would make sure he had to ask for it, in front of all her friends.  She had never before experienced such power over someone, and it made her hungry for more.
“Melanie, can you come down please” she heard her mum shout.
She leapt off the bed “coming!”.  She headed down the stairs and into the living room.
“Hi Mel, I heard you and Melissa enjoyed your weekend with Aileen and her son an daughter” her mother said.
“er, yes, it was great.  Ms. MacDonald was very kind to invite us”,  she said carefully, wondering what was coming.
“I’ve heard of Aileen’s unusual disciplinary method with her so, and she has told me you have been such a help to her.  In fact crucial, she said”
“That’s kind of her, but, really, it’s no bother” worried that her mother was going to somehow stop her involvement.
“Well, I’m please that you have been so helpful, in fact, it gave me some ideas about life in here.  You know how much trouble the boys can be?”
“Yes, I know, mum, I’ve seen you at your wits end” said Melanie.
“That’s right, I have been, and I wonder if you could help me out in that respect?”
“How could I do that, mum?” she said, starting to get excited.
“Well, I’ve heard that you spank Aileen’s son, I wonder if you would do it to your brothers as well?  I spanked Colin yesterday, but if he got spanked by his sister, well, that would be so much more embarrassing.”
“I’ll do anything to help, you know that, mum”
“Good, I was afraid you wouldn’t want to, after all the work with the MacDonald’s.  I’ll tell the two of them tonight that you have authority,”
Later, Melanie met Susan in town and told her the latest over coffee.  Susan seemed quite pleased for her in a funny way.  Melanie, of course, had some plans involving little Angie, and had had them for some time.  She had not fully worked them out yet, but she almost told his sister, as she didn’t think it would shock her now.  She seemed as taken with the whole baby Angie thing as she herself was.  She thought about it, but decided to wait till she could work out the details.
She went to bed that night one very contented girl.  The next night her two brother’s went to bed with very sore bottoms, courtesy of their sister.


krystalasbaby2017

  • Winner of the Golden Panties Award
  • **********
  • Posts: 365
  • Karma: +1121/-6
Re: My first attempt at a story
« Reply #30 on: October 27, 2019, 03:21:21 PM »
Oh i see Mel i getting to enjoy her new found authority over boys, her mum allowing her to spank them.  I wonder if that will continue further like baby Angie.

robertson

  • Ballerina
  • ****
  • Posts: 17
  • Karma: +2458/-2
Re: My first attempt at a story
« Reply #31 on: February 17, 2020, 10:17:18 AM »
Part 11 – School Days

Angie was now a boy again, at least for school.  One needs an education you know, or so his mother and sister said.  It was  a relief to be out of the girls outfits, but having to wear a nappy to school was a real downer.  Plus the minute he got home, it was straight back into girl’s clothes, no matter what.
Melanie and his sister checked up on him all the time and the consequences of a sneaky trip to the bathroom would be a very public bare bottomed spanking by either of them, or both.  The thing was, he had wet himself and was walking around with a wet nappy.  What he had to do was find whichever one of his sister or Melanie was alone, and ask to be changed.  This was difficult as they were popular and always seemed to be surrounded by other girls.  How could he get one of them alone so that he wouldn’t have to endure a public nappy change?

It was break time but that would only last another 15 minutes, and he was running out of time.  If he didn’t get changed then it would be a wet nappy right through physics and chemistry.  He couldn’t bear the thought of that but couldn’t bear the thought of his sister or Melanie changing him either.  What to do?  He wandered through the corridors, and looked into one of the form rooms, where his sister often hung out and couldn’t believe his luck.
There, framed against the far window, was Melanie, and all alone.  Now was his chance!  He quickly stepped into the room, only to be horrified at the sight of four girls, at the far end of the room, seated down, where he couldn’t see them from the outside.  He tried to retreat but -

“What do you want?” asked Melanie

“Er, nothing” He said, feeling for the door behind him.

Melanie smiled “Stop! Stay where you are.  Wait a minute; have you wet your nappy?  Don’t fib now, boys who fib get their bottoms smacked”

He blushed bright red “Yes”

“No problem!  I’ll change you, but you have to ask properly”

“What do you mean?” he asked

“You have to tell me that you are just a little boy, who has wet his nappy, and then say “please Miss Melanie, can you change me” Go on.”

He stood still and blushed even redder.

“If you don’t say it, you’ll be over my knee, nappy down, bot smacked, then put straight back in that wet nappy”

“OK, OK” he said

“Go on then – “I’m a little...”” she said rolling her arm round and round

Still he stood there.  She put her leg up on a stool, and started to unbuckle her sandal. 

“Are you really going to be naughty?”  she asked “This sandal will really make your bottom red”

He heard giggles from his left.  A voice piped up “Go on, Mel, smack his bottom!”

“You have 5 seconds”, she said “5, 4, 3,....”

“I’m a little boy, who wet his nappy.  Please Miss Melanie, can you change me?”

“Good boy!  Again!”

“I’m a little boy, who wet his nappy.  Please Miss Melanie, can you change me?”

“Again”

“I’m a little boy, who wet his nappy.  Please Miss Melanie, can you change me?”

She buckled her shoe up again, to a groan of disappointment from the other girls.  “Of course I can, lie on this desk.  Don’t fidget”

He lay down on the indicated desk and covered his face, horrified at having his nappy changed in front of the girls.  Such sensitivities were, of course, nothing to Melanie.  She still loved the power she had over him.  She made sure that the nappy change took as long as possible, especially at the baby powder stage when she took great and exaggerated care to sprinkle it everywhere.

Ian just lay there and thought of his future.

krystalasbaby2017

  • Winner of the Golden Panties Award
  • **********
  • Posts: 365
  • Karma: +1121/-6
Re: My first attempt at a story
« Reply #32 on: February 17, 2020, 11:53:59 PM »
to be changed at school would be so humiliating especially in front of those other girls.

robertson

  • Ballerina
  • ****
  • Posts: 17
  • Karma: +2458/-2
Re: My first attempt at a story
« Reply #33 on: September 08, 2020, 08:49:22 AM »
Part 11 - The big job offer

Aileen MacDonald, looked at the letter in her hand with a mixture of surprise, elation and even a little worry.  She had been offered the job!  She didn't think she had even done that well at the interview. During that morning she had had to spank Ian/Angie again as he had been particularly rebellious, and her mind was still going six to the dozen, even during the interview.  Yet, She got the job!

She knew when she first applied, however, that getting the job would bring it's own problems.  It was in New Zealand.  Her children were at a crucial stage with their education.  Her daughter was sitting her A levels in about six months and her son (or her other daughter she mused) would be the same for his/her O levels.  She couldn't really take them to a new school, a new education system and a new country right now.  Yet the requirements of the job were that she had to begin in no more than two months.  What to do, she thought.  Well there would be little point talking it over with that brat of a son.  No solution would come of that.  What about Susan?

Later

"Wow, mum, that's great.  You must be pleased"

"Well, of course, but what about you two and your education?" Aileen replied, "This is a crucial year.  It could determine and define your whole futures.  I can't take you over to New Zealand right now."

"Well, don't then." her daughter replied, " Leave us here.  Once the exams are past we can then come out and join you.  I'm old enough and sensible enough to manage"

"What about your brother?  He definitely isn't!"

"Mum, I'm already in charge of him.  Let's see now.  I dress him, undress him, change his nappies, feed him, bathe him.  I'm already almost a second "mummy" to him"

"Yes, OK, but you only assist me.  It would then be down to you full time.  What about revision for the exams.  How would you find the time?"

"Maybe the two Mels can help with that." Susan suggested.

"Well, that would help and they are certainly responsible, but there's another problem."

"What's that mum?" Susan asked

"We don't have unlimited money, and while the job is well paid, property prices in New Zealand are higher than here.  I'd have to sell the house in order to afford one there.  Where would you live?"

"Look mum, Melanie's my best friend.  When her father ran off, the settlement meant that they all live in that huge house.  Even though there's five of them, there's still three spare rooms.  I know that one is used as an office for her mother, but that leaves two, one for each of us."

"You're presuming that they will be alright with that solution"

"I'm not, but leave it to me.  I'll speak to Melanie and her mother"

"What a helpful daughter I've got" Thought Ms. MacDonald.

Melanie was stunned.  She'd just had her dream scenario, one she couldn't think how to pull off, fall into her lap!  She'd just got off the phone with Susan.  All she had to do was persaude her mum, and she didn't think that would be hard.  Then Susan and Ian/Angie would be over here.  It would soon be Angie and not Ian/Angie, she thought.  Those spare rooms would need converting.  So might as well convert one to a full nursery!  Of course it would perhaps be time limited, but perhaps not.  Angie would be getting put to bed in a little girls nightie, a nappy and with a well smacked bottom, every night!

Oh well!  No time like the present.  She went downstairs and into the living room "Mum, have you got a few minutes?"

BabyJay

  • Mommy's Dearest
  • *****
  • Posts: 37
  • Karma: +33/-1
Re: My first attempt at a story
« Reply #34 on: June 27, 2022, 12:26:51 PM »
Thank you for a delightful first story. I hope you will continue with the life of Ian/Angie now he appears to be almost completely babyfied. Like others I would like to see Him/Her wearing the thick cloth(terry) nappies and those pretty frilly/ruffled baby knickers. Perhaps completely turned into a baby girl, lovely curly hairdo, pierced ears, eyebrows plucked and lovely pink lipstick and nails painted pink? heres hoping and once again thank you.

 

The more you give, the more I can give back.

The dots in the map below represent every person who visited Betty's since May 17, 2020. Blinking dots show people currently here. However if you haven't clicked on anything in a couple minutes your dot won't blink until you click on something again.

























Web
Analytics

Hits to Betty's Pubs since Sept. 30th, 2004

eXTReMe Tracker

Website, forum design, software, & security on this site is copyrighted. It was made personally by Betty Pearl, of Betty Pearl's Pubs, Sissy Stories, buffalobetties, pearlcorona. Betty's Pub is a non-profit organization & support group for the transgendered, & Fetware community. We don't sell anything, & we don't data mine your personal information & habits to sell like MOST other sites do. We respect your privacy & won't sell it out for a few bucks.

Site for: Sissy Stories, ABDL Stories, Sissy Art, Crossdressing, Transgender