All at Sea

[antonia]

There might be an epilogue but I have two possible endings which is why I stopped where I did. I might publish both and you can keep the ending you like best.

I do plan to write more but not right now. I am quite eager to go back to City Slicker story from ages ago that I never really finished despite bring 32 pages long!

[Ahiru]

I want to see Victoria get a happy ending :( Sure she made bad choices and had a bit ofa power kick but I feel she loved Chris and didn't completely deserve the end she got...but that might be because I'm too soft...

[Ashlynn]

I want to see Victoria get a happy ending :( Sure she made bad choices and had a bit ofa power kick but I feel she loved Chris and didn't completely deserve the end she got...but that might be because I'm too soft...

Not sure what the plan is, but personally wouldn't mind seeing Victoria and Chris living together buying diapers and nappies with Victoria wearinfmg diapers but otherwise being the mommy and loving her little sissy baby Chris with financial help from John and/or Victoria's family  while Jane gets nothing having forced this on chris and although unexpectedly also Victoria

[babycakes]

Great story but I agree with others and have mixed feelings about the conclusion.  Certainly Jane's hostility to Victoria is understandable since she was complicit in the breakup of Jane and John's marriage.  Also, Victoria went ahead with Chris' infantilization even though she knew him to be fully continent and not a tbdl.  However, it is sad that Victoria is left all alone.  Maybe Jane could be the adult and raise Victoria as an adult baby.

Chris also didn't deserve his fate but he has both Jane and himself to blame.  No 15 year old boy can be infantilized if he has the will.  Unfortunately, Chris has a very weak will.  Jane deserves punishment in this case since she took out her anger at her husband on her innocent son.  Maybe she should be infantilized by Victoria.

Nevertheless, a great story.  Just wanted to put in my 2 cents.

[antonia]

All comments are great! You have all provided lots of brilliant ideas and different scenarios. It would be impossible for them all to come true but even I am feeling sorry for Victoria so another chapter will be written.

[Ahiru]

Thank you so much! ?

[parkintochter]

Replying to a six year old story might be weird but I want to say. I really liked the story, but I think the best part was until the baby punishment. I loved the control she had over him, but that kind of faded away, when his potty privileges were completely removed.