The 1st communion

[brenda604]

Hi to everything in the forum. As you can see, I'm a new member. My english  level is not good in all aspects, but this is a effort of a rookie author to show a story. Hope you like it



THE FIRST COMMUNION



Cameron was in his "personal disaster" (his room), listening an At the drive-in' song, and making a guitar movements with his hand and sing "seeend transmisssiion oneee armed scisoooor, cuuut awaaaay, cuuut away". He was a tall (6 ft), thin and non-social 18 years old young boy. Always in the street, lonely, or in his room, listening rock bands like Joy Division, Rolling Stones, Pink Floyd or Iggy Pop, etc... while read rock magazines or any book of his library. The books and the music CD's was his greatest treasure.



Until his mother burst onto the noisy room and said him. "Hey you. We're going to the church"



"What?" Cameron answered "Mom, you know it well. I hate this place"



She pull one of his arms to take it off his bed and said "Like it or not, You'll come with me! I'll register you for the first communion"



Cameron started to get angry and shouted.



"What are you talking about? That is a children trash. I don't want"



His mother replied to the complaint



"You was baptized, You are catholic, You must do the first communion, late or early, Understand?"



"Yeeees moooom" He answered, disguised.



Cameron and his mother' familiy was catholic, but his mother never wanted a boy, even since before her pregnancy. She always want a little girl, sweet, feminine, with a good behavior and wishes to find a man to marry with him dressed like a bride, and be a good mother. But she have a problematic rocker son, without any girlfriend across the time... Cameron was a disaster. He was not the best son, Why? 'cause He don't wanna be the best son.



Returning to the story, both, mother and son, come to the church. In the priest' office, his mother received a peper sheet with lines and options to fill with a pen. Cameron went away to a corner to listen his iPod, without children shouting, only the life in peace, "like the John Lennon' song", he reminded.



His mother filled the register form. She had to put a "X" in the correct frame in the Gender section. There, she imagined to Cameron in another side, like the little girl that she had always want... Then, she put the "X", in the frame of "Female", and the name... was the same: Cameron Jones, The name sounded good in a boy or a girl, there's no had any trouble.



Cameron never really thought in the first saturday of church school. In his mind, only was the idea of "the trash communion", while he saw in the iPod screen, the cover of Riot Act, his favorite Pearl Jam album and listen "Love boat captain"...



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II



Saturday. 8:00 hrs. It was the first for the 1st communion children in the church school. Cameron walked down the main street, listening his iPod, now with Metallica heavy songs. He wore a t-shirt with ...and justice for all cover printed, black jeans and a very damaged pair of converse. He only think in a way to avoid that psychological torture, but he has no idea about that happens the first saturday.



That morning, Cameron arrives to the church yard and sit in the floor, because the chairs was too little for him. Gradually, many little boys and girls arrive and the priest said them.



"OK. Here, you will prepare for take the communion for the rest of your lives. I will name first the girls' list..."



In that moment, he turned off the iPod and listen many names until the priest says...



"...Celine, Jenny, Anne Marie and Cameron"



When he listened his name in the end of the girls list, Cameron was surprised. How was appeared his name in the wrong list? When the priest finished with the boys list, Cameron follow him.



"Excuse me, Why is my name in the girls list?" He asked

"Who are you?" The priest answered

"Cameron Jones" He said

"Mmm..." The priest saw the list "Oh, I'm really sorry, yes, you are in the wrong list, but my file is a PDF. I cannot modify the lists"

"WHAT?" Cameron said "It means that..."

"That you work and the communion day you will wear like the another girls: A first communion dress"

"NOOOO, PLEASE NOOOO. If you want, I modify the PDF in my notebook. I have OpenOffice, but I DON'T WANT TO WEAR A DRESS, I DON'T WANT TO BE A RIDICULOUS SISSY". Cameron said, nervious



The priest put a sorry face and, sadly, said.



"Really, I'm sorry and thanks for your help, but I can't modify the lists, that means a critical fault"



A tear escaped from the Cameron's eyes. The priest gave him a handkerchief.



"Don't worry, Cameron. I understand, you don't want this. Don't cry, You should see like this: It will be only a day, after, everything forget the error" The priest said him "C'mon, We go to the sessions room, There I'll present you with the girls"



"OK" He answered



The priest and Cameron arrive to the sessions room. There, the priest said to the children sitting on their little chairs:



"Well kids, he is Cameron. By a register error, he appeared in the girls list. He isn't a girl, of course, but he will take the communion, precisely, with the girls. I don't want any mockery to him, ARE YOU UNDERSTAND, MISTERS?" The priest said to the boys



"YEEEES" They answered. Then, He take in Cameron to the girls group.



"And you, young ladies, please. I want you try to make up to your group, ok?"



"Yes, father" Only a girl answer. She was Jessie, a pretty 9 years old girl. Then, she turn her face to Cameron and said him



"Hi Cameron, come with us, sitting here..." She invited him



"Thanks" Cameron answered, slowly embarrased. Jessie began to present him to all girls of the communion group. Hanna (8 years old), Sophie (8 years old), Celine (10 years old), Megan (11 years old), Kim (9 years old), Anne Marie (The most little of all: 7 years old), Amy (8 years old), Alisson (9 years old), Kelly (10 years old) and Jennifer (9 years old)



"I wanna question something" said Cameron "Had you meet for many years ago?"



"Yes. We're living in the same neighborhood to the end the main street" Kelly answered him "Almost since we were babies"



"But you, Cameron, we never had known you" Amy said "where do you live?"



"Exactly, in your neighborhood, girls" He said them



The questions to Cameron didn't stop until the end of the session. Here, all the girls say goodbye to Cameron before to go with their parents. He wave his hand and take another route. He thought in the error, but he remind more how the girls welcome him to their group...



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III



Every saturday, in a break of the communion session, Cameron and the girls talked, played with Barbies (Cameron was Ken, of course), listened the Cameron's iPod , or challenged to boys in a baseball or football game. Cameron helped to the girls with his homeworks too, specially in math or grammar. Thank to Cameron, more girls join to the communion group. The parents met to Cameron and see on him a good boy. In a few time, he was loved for all the neighborhood.



One monday. Cameron had arrived to his house. Said hello to his mother. She talk in the telephone with a friend about the "pink paint", "disney princesses" and "hearts". "Another decoration project for a little girl", he thought, perhaps a little girl like his new friends... or the destruction of his old room, with rock bands and comic heroes posters. Goodbye to his CD's, to his laptop, his iPod? Now, does he live as a girl for the rest of his life? Probably, yes. Then, Cameron applied a strategy. In his room, Cameron had a little secret door where he hid the unpleasant things from his mother, then, that was the optimum hiding place for his treasures. There stored all: CD's, posters, books, newspĂ pers, school fanzines, his electric bass and amplifier and his laptop. He cleaned the room and his mother was surprised with this.



"Wooow, It's a miracle. Your room is clean, no rock trash, no SATANIC THINGS..."



The rage involved to Cameron and said



"Mom, I'll say it all I know... an error, yes... and now, besides the trash communion, I will be a silly sissy boy in a..."



"In a pretty dress, sweetie" She said him "I knew it all, too, and I have a surprise for you"



The bell sounded. She went to open the main door. Cameron, angry yet, said to himself "Hell, now I'll be the neighborhood sissy princess". His mother interrupted his thoughts.



"Look whom did come to see you" Said his mother. She invited to the communion girls to the house. Cameron couldn't avoid to smile while the little girls runs to hold him



"I knew this makes you happy, my little princess" Cameron felt a beautiful sensation. He started to feel like a girl, like the mommy's little girl.



Julie (it was the name of Cameron's mom) called to all with a delicious strawberry cake towards the garden. In the picnic table, the girls talking about her dresses for the ceremony. Cameron didn't talk with them. Kim noticed of this and ask him



"Do you have your dress, Cameron?"



"Not, not yet. Maybe the next week I'll buy it..." He said, with a sad face



"Wait here, sweetie..." She said him



Then, Kim called to the girls and talk with them. Next, every girl take the Cameron telephone with the Julie's permission. He awaited in the garden and ask his mother:



"What are girls doing?" He said



"I think that they want help you. You helped them and that is appreciated by a girl"



40 minutes later, all the girls' mothers was in the Cameron' house



"What is this?" Cameron asked to the girls. Jessie said him



"You must remind this: A princess always needs to wear a pretty dress. Although you are really a rocker boy, for us, you are a beautiful little princess and needs a dress NOW"



Cameron blushed with the Jessie's words



"Really?" He said



"Yes" All the girls answered him



Everyone come with Cameron to go, that evening, to buy his dress...



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[brenda604]

lepetit. Thanks again for the link. It was useful to debug any errors  :wink:



Now... This is the 4th part of my story. Enjoy.



IV



Cameron, the girls and his mothers went to a children clothes shop in the most exclusive zone of the city. He went in the Julia's Car. She told him about his make-up. Cameron suggested her some simple, because he wouldn't want appear something grotesque, only take out his feminine side. The trouble was his hair. Cameron had a short hair and never wanted long hair. Therefore, his hair style would make himself, like all the days.



Meanwhile, the another girls talking about the Cameron' dress. The girls and Cameron had a agreement: no one girl would wear the same dress than other. However, everything agreed in the pretty will be Cameron in his communion dress.



Finally, arrived to the shop. The seller had scared with all the little girls and her mothers. Julie said to the seller



"I'm looking for a first communion dress"



"To which of the girls?"  The seller answered



"No, the dress is for my son" Said Julie, appointing to Cameron



The seller fall silent with the words. Then, She went to the wardrobe and take off various dresses. Cameron was in the fitting room, trying every dress...



Almost 3 hours later, Cameron wear a dress that he likes. It was a classic communion dress, long to the knees, fantastic... All the girls was amazed when look to Cameron in the dress. Julie couldn't restrain her emotions. Her eyes was delighted while her lips drew a smile. Now, his depressive son was a innocent and sweet little communion girl. The best moment came when the seller put a white-pink headdress in his hair, together with a delicate and little veil. Cameron blushed, again, when the girls told to their mothers "He looks so pretty" or "SHE looks like a little princess"



Cameron was happy with the dress, and Julia, provided that her new little girl was beautiful in the big day, paid the dress and accesories. After, everybody saw any beauty halls for the make-up and finally, they ate a delicious ice cream. Cameron liked the chocolate ice-cream, and Alisson, Kim, Hanna, Jessie and Megan too. Anne Marie, Kelly, Celine and Jennifer enjoyed their strawberry ice cream. Only Amy and Sophie prefer vainilla. To thank the girls help, Cameron paid their ice creams.



In the car. Cameron connected his iPod. He already wanted to enjoy his music, but the don't push play any The horrors album, or the complete Back in black by AC-DC. He had selected "Race for the prize", a beauty The Flaming Lips song. While the song sounded, He reminded his past life, a sad existance between his room or the nights away from his house, without any contact with another teen boys or girls. Cameron always in his world... and he think in his new life, where everybody loved him, had real friends, helped to all and He was happy, but, precisely, everybody started to see Cameron like a happy girl...



A few days later, Julia bought to Cameron a pair of white tights and ruffled panties, but she had a last trouble: The shoes. She didn't know about if Cameron would use high heels or Mary Janes. Finally, Julia prefered the Mary Janes. Some boys recognized her and, a saturday, in the communion session on the church yard, the priest went to his office and there, James, a boy, said him, in an offensive tone



"Look the girly-boy... hahaha... Where is your dolly? C'mon, or do you have fear to ruin your pink dress, sweetie cupcake?..."



When the girls listened the mockery, they ran with Cameron and Anne Marie said to the boys, with a sweet but loud voice



"You knew that YOU MUSN'T MOCK HIM. He never got on with you but all the girls here are his friends, and we won't let you hurt him. Now, get out!"



James go out with the boys, and never, no one boy mocked to Cameron...



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Claudia: Again, Thanks for your comment.



Now, the 5th part



V



A friday, one week before the communion day, Cameron came back from the school. A few steps before, he heard some noise from his house. He opened the door, and when he arrived to his room, shouted:



"WHAT DID YOU DO WITH MY ROOM, FOR ALL THE HELL?"



"Nothing will be enough for my sweet girl" Julie said. The workers laughed while they painted white lines to the pink walls. Outside, he saw, a pink bed with a Sleeping Beauty quilt, a teddy bear, and a pink table and chair. On the table. Cameron had seen some posters. He horrified to watch them: Disney princesses, Barbie as Rapunzel, Enchanted... Cameron got angry and went with his mother.



"I suppose that you pretend transform me in a little girl, isn't it?.  Ok. An you pretend that I wear dresses, skirts, blouses... and use a blonde wig... OK... I will do, but maybe you need more information, because, first, a girl of my age thinks about her wardrobe, her make-up, boys and that piece of trash called pop music, and last... I'm a boy, not a girl!"



"Yes, sweetie, you're right, except in a thing. FOR ME, YOU, CAMERON JONES, YOU ARE MY PRETTY 8 YEAR OLD DAUGHTER AND YOU WILL BE LIKE A LITTLE GIRL OF YOUR AGE. The priest said me about the boys' mockery, and I won't let this. Now, put the dress, the last of my wardrobe, ok, and don't forget the petticoat, the panties, the pink tights and your new black mary janes?"



"YEES MOOOM"



Cameron put the dress and the petticoat. The dress was in satin pink, short and frilly, with puffed sleeves and layers of white lace. When he put the shoes in his feet, Julia came with a big pink bow an put it onto his head. He looked in the mirror and saw a sissy girl, meanwhile, his mother said him.



"Oh darling, my sweetie, you are the prettiest little girl in the world!"



He and Julia went to a near mall. Cameron had to support the embarrasement and the people laughs when they see him, with comments as "Sissy", "Girly-boy", or "Ridiculous". When Julie was in a jewelry, She said to Cameron



"Sweetie. Come back to home. I'll be much time here"



"Ok mom"



Cameron left the mall. He only thought about the embarrasement moment in the mall, but 30 minutes later, he saw in the street to Edward, the brother of James with Chloe, his girlfriend. Everything was normal until Cameron see how Edward shouted to Chloe, while she cried. Then, Edward, angry, gave her a hard blow in his face, and Chloe fell to the street. Cameron went to Edward, but before, Edward said him:



"Get out, stupid sissy boy"



"No, YOU get out of here. You think that you are a real man when you shout her, when you beat her. But the reality is other. When you maltrate her, you are the worst trash in the world. You are a coward" Cameron said, hardly



"Shut up, silly" Edward answered, with some embarrasement



"Ok, surely you want that I broke your pathetic face, no? Now get out of my view before I do it!" Cameron said, angry.



After, Cameron went to Chloe and ask her



"Are you OK? You have a thin bloodline from your lips. Do you wanna take to your house? That idiot shouldn't treat you from that way" Chloe accepted and both walked across the main street



"Thank you very much, really... You are like my heroine, but... you look so sissy to your size and why do you have a grave voice?" Chloe ask him



"Well, I wear this dress because my mother wanted to use it. I'll do the first communion in one week and I appeared in the girls list by an error and I'll have to wear a dress"



"Oh, I'm sorry" She said "What's your name?"



"Cameron" He answered "If you want, you can go the next saturday to the ceremony in the church and the party in my house..."



"Really? Yes, I'll be here and I promise you that I'll give you a surprise in your party. Is a pinky promise, OK" She said, while join her little finger with Cameron' finger



"Is a pinky promise" cameron said her



They arrived to Chloe's house. There, she gave him a little kiss in his cheek and wave bye bye to him...



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A COMMENT: Now, you can decide how to continue this story. What would you like Cameron wear in the last communion session? His sissy dress or his rock shirts, converse and broken jeans? This will define the course of the story....

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Samantha: Thanks for your comment!



And here... the 6th part. Cameron will discover that the love of a mother is far beyond of the gender... even if he's a sissy girl with a rock band! And many surprises. Enjoy!



VI



On the previous days. Cameron accepted to wear his two frilly sissy dresses. His girly new life began to like it. He didn't take any importance to the mockeries, and he concentrate only in a thing: To be a good little girl. His "pinky space" (It was the new name that he put to his room) was always clean. To avoid other troubles, Cameron had hidden his iPod with his other boy things in his secret door.Now, his computer was pink and he only watch girls websites... and he enjoyed this!



At the evening, Cameron and Julie delivered the invitations to all the neighborhood for the communion party at the Cameron's garden. That gonna be a big party. Then, Cameron asked to his mother:



"Mom, can I perform any songs with my band at the party?"



"What? But if you are a girl, sweetie, You cannot play with a rock band!"



"Yes, and they know it. Since the monday, they said me that there's no matter with that. Besides, there are bands with a girl as the lead singer: Garbage, The raveonettes, Yeah yeah yeahs..."



"OK, you can perform with your band, but only for this time"



Cameron hold to his mother and said her



"Thanks mom. Beyond everything, I love you!"



"I love you too, sweetie" Julia answered him



The last saturday in the communion session arrived. That day, he wore his pink dress, and the rest of his sissy clothes. When he arrived, everybody was surprised to see Cameron in that pretty clothes, even the girls. Anne Marie said him



"Oh my god, you look so pretty, you look like a big dolly, really"



He came with the girls. There, he explained all about his new room, and the girly life. Until Megan asked him, with some sadness:



"But...  you never come back to be a boy?"



"I don't know. The life as a girl really likes me, but I miss my boy life, alone, or perform with my band at the school... This situation is hard for me"



"You know that, if you will be in the future a boy or a girl, that's no problem. You will be always our friend, ok?" Jennifer added "Now, the break! Girls, let's go to play"



Cameron went with his friends, but before to heal them, the boys closed him the pass.



"Hey you, sweetie, did you forget your dolly?" James said him with sarcasm.



"I don't know what are you talking about" Cameron answered



"No? But today, you'll know a real men"



A strawberry little cake was launched to his face, and after, Cameron was derribed by all the boys. Then, the boys started to kick him. Ian, another boy, spilled chocolate milk in his dress. Cameron began to cry and Ian said to the boys:



"Awww, our little princess is crying. C'mon boys, kick him!"



The girls had percated of the situation, and fastly, quit the boys from Cameron, while Megan advertised to the priest in his office.



When the priest arrived to the yard, he punished to the boys. He said them that they wouldn't go to the party and they'd have only a simple breakfast in their houses.



Cameron continued crying, but the girls hold him. There, Celine said him:



"A princess always must be happy, never sad" She looked at his ruined dress "Ohhh, your dress are dirty... Perhaps my sister could lend you some clothes. James is a wild boy, I don't know really why he is my brother"



Cameron was surprised with this. Celine was the James' sister! "Oh, poor Celine, with that kind of brother, I don't imagine her life" he said  himself. Meanwhile, he reminded a song, and he began to sing Why did you sleep last night by Nirvana. "My girl, my girl..." until Celine said him.



"Cameron, come with us to the car..."



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The 7th part of the story is here. I'd like that someone say me why sometimes appear to open this page a message that says "You have been banned from this forum..." and It doesn't get out until 4 or more hours later...



Enjoy this part!

VII



Cameron introduced to the Suzanne (it was the name of Celine's mother) car: a 2004 Chrysler town and country. At this time, Suzanne was scolding to James. "You was a bad boy, you will be shut in your room, and you won't have Xbox 360 for all a year, are you understanding me?"



"Yes mom" He began to cry



"Please, don't cry. You will be punish 'cause you have made a bad action, you kicked an inoffensive girl"



"But..."



"SHUT UP AND SIT!"



Then, Suzanne watched to Cameron and said him



"Ohh sweetie, are you OK? That boys are very, very wild"



"Don't worry, Mrs. Schneider, It was only a dress..." Cameron answered her



"No, no, no. A dress is an important element to a girl. I'll repare your dress and wash the rest of your clothes"



When the van had arrived to the Celine's house, Cameron looked it and he felt that place had known some days ago, but when he left the van, he could see a very known girl... She was... Chloe! When Chloe see Cameron with his broken dress, she ran to him:



"Oh! Who was the beast that made this disaster?" Chloe said



"Your brother, again..." Suzanne answered her



Everybody introduced to the house. There, Cameron said to Suzanne:



"Excuse me, Mrs. Schneider, can I talk only a moment with James, please?"



"Ok darling, I know that you can do much for him"



Suzanne, Celine and Chloe went to the kitchen. Meanwhile, Cameron called to James to the armchair.



"Jamie, I wanna talk with you"



"What do you want?" James said, embarrased and angry



"I understand you. I, at your age, was a very problematic boy"



"Really?"



"Yes. Nobody in the school supported me. The principal called many times to my mother for my bad behaviour. Maybe for that reason, I was a loneliness and non-social teenager... and now, I have to be like a little girl, and I have been percibing many things, almost everything that a girl feels, her way of life... and this had been hard for me. Think about them. If you have a little girl, perhaps, Celine, your sister, would you like that a boys group beat you?"



"No" James said him



"Then, why did you do it?" Cameron asked him



"Because... beacuse... you aren't a girl, you are a silly and sissy teenage boy"



"Yes, at this time, I will be a "silly and sissy boy", but since I've been with the girls, I've been more sensitive, sweetest, kindest... They, the girls, included your sister, had strengthed my feminine side, and that helped me to be a better boy. Because I know that I'm a boy and I'm not a girl, and I know, too, that I'll never be totally a girl. But I suppoused that you play many times in your Xbox with Edward..."



"How did you know it?" James asked him



"You have some Edward's attitudes. Did you know that he beated to Chloe? And I, a silly sissy boy, helped her"



"No, I never knew it"



"Well. I don't want to see you converted in another trash like Edward, Your mother, Celine and Chloe don't want it, either. Nobody likes to be scolded, and you know that if you are a good boy, your mom will buy you... the Halo 3 for your Xbox, an example..."



"That's my favorite game, Cameron!"



"Good! If you have a good behavior in this days, I promise you will have a Halo 3... and a one year suscription to Xbox Live, OK?



James hold him and said



"Thank you very much, Cameron! I will be a good boy"



In the door, both sisters and Suzanne watched the moment



"Cameron is really like an angel" Chloe said



"Yes, darling" Suzanne answered "Cameron is a good person, far beyond of his dresses or whatever you want"



"Cameron and I will be the prettiest girls in the communion!" Celine said, happily



Suzanne opened the door and said to James



"I hope that Cameron have teached you a lesson. And you, Cameron, please give me your dress to repair and go with Celine and Chloe. I took a towel for you, darling"



Cameron went to the girls' room. When he looked it, he find some resemblances with his pinky space. From her wardrobe, Chloe extracted a pink blouse, a white skirt, a white panties and a bra. She said to Celine.



"Bring me the mommy's cotton, please"



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