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Author Topic: Secluded Cabin Sissy  (Read 75251 times)

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Re: Secluded Cabin Sissy
« Reply #70 on: January 28, 2019, 07:56:55 PM »
Thanks so much for this latest chapter. Generally, I'm not usually into the whole "dominated by younger kid" trope, and initially I was sad to see that getting so much airtime here. But the way you convey Jack's social demotion here is so scorchingly hot. Not sure why, but Jack being fed separately because he's a little kid was so deliciously humiliating. Ditto with his fear of the older boy and his rejection from that boy and his older sister. Read this this morning and have been thinking about it all day. Thank you so much! (Now, if only the adult man had not corrected the "princess" comment about Jack!)


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Re: Secluded Cabin Sissy
« Reply #71 on: January 28, 2019, 08:49:52 PM »
Sissykimmy1 - I wasn't really sure how much mileage I could get out of Jack being not in sissy things, so I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Pervscenes11 - I've taken a few risks with this chapter, so I'm glad you liked it even if it wasn't really your cup of tea.


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Re: Secluded Cabin Sissy
« Reply #72 on: January 28, 2019, 10:49:08 PM »
I loved it! You're getting something across really subtly but clearly: everyone sees Jack, status-wise, as a very young girl. It's only Jack that doesn't get it. It's so hot.

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Re: Secluded Cabin Sissy
« Reply #73 on: January 28, 2019, 11:23:02 PM »
Pervscenes11 - Well, they had to pair up somehow. It wouldn't be fair for Caitlyn to have to play alone while Jack, Jessie, and Kyle were all hanging out upstairs together. Really, it was generous of Jack to "volunteer" to play with Caitlyn.

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Re: Secluded Cabin Sissy
« Reply #74 on: January 29, 2019, 04:45:38 AM »
Jack is in a road to babyhood heheh in the last chapter when we see he been treated like a little kid I think that is a setup to downgrade jack so we can get along that he’s been transform in a baby in the end of the road, now I think he gonna wet in his nap and after this I think he gonna be put in diaper, here I really hope that the author make a way that Michael have some pampers disposable  diapers in his cabin and put jack in them I can only imagine the embarrassment for jack to use diapers meant for a toddler, this could cement his road to babyhood hhehe, keep the good work and please use my suggestion heheh

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Re: Secluded Cabin Sissy
« Reply #75 on: January 29, 2019, 10:06:36 PM »
Considering how logical and true to her word his mother has been so far, I'm honestly surprised she's contributed to pushing him back into the little sissy role.

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Re: Secluded Cabin Sissy
« Reply #76 on: January 31, 2019, 11:49:21 AM »
As always, your writing is excellent.  Thanks for continuing the story.  That said, I have to admit to a bit of confusion.

First, I'm confused about Jack's height and the role it plays in the situation he's placed in at the neighbor's house.  In response to one of my earlier comments you said, "I've been playing fast and loose with Jack's size this entire time! I can assure you, however, that it will all be explained in time and just adds further impetus for Jack to cooperate and behave."  Then, in this most recent chapter, Jack describes Kyle as, "...despite being the same age as him, was taller even than Jessie. He stood at least a head and a half taller than Jack and Jack felt his nerve shrink as he realized he was afraid of the bigger boy."  Yet, much earlier in the story Jessie was described as being only "a tiny bit taller than him [Jack]..."  Given general statistics, the average male 12 y.o. is 61.5" (156.2 cm) and a "head and a half" would equate to about 12" - 15" meaning Jack is about 49" or less.  But since Jessie is only a tiny bit taller than Jack why would Kyle not believe that Jack and Jessie are the same age.  If I'm on track about Jack's height then it could be logical that he would be paired with Caitlyn, especially if she's big for her age and especially given Jack's punishment as a baby girl when they last met. 

Second, could you be dropping hints that Kyle is treated younger than his age at times either as a punishment or just to keep him in line (e.g., "I still wipe Kyle’s face too, so no need to be so embarrassed”)?  Certainly, if that's true, Kyle would not want to be associated with Jack and attract a similar punishment so age is just a ruse to distance himself from Jack.

Third, why is Diane so willing to let the neighbors think of Jack as much younger than Jessie and his true age and enforcing a feminine view of him, calling him a "tattletale princess" when he is dressed as a normal near-teen and we have no indication of him exhibiting any bad behavior.  I think earlier comments that Diane can't be trusted are coming true.

Finally, why is Michael so accepting of Diane's treatment of Jack? 

As I've said before, sorry to run on but I love this story and it's the realism and your excellent storytelling that keep me coming back for more.

 

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